As a teenager

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I had a long way to go,
And none to me the path show.

Through the ups and downs
As the angry wind sounds
Through the vigorous seas
Success would finally touch me.

I had a  long way to go
And none to me the path show.

I had made a friend
Who would with me proceed
Till the very end
Until together we did succeed.

None to lead,
None to follow,
Together we accede
To step into the darkness' hollow.

We have a long way to go
And none to us the path show.

We have a war to fight
Our opponents are right.
And they are also very strong,
But we are not wrong.

A chance to fulfill great expectations
And define our destinations.
A chance to undo all wrong deeds
And make others happy as we proceed.
A chance to win many a hearts
And throw the success' doors apart
A chance to show what we can do,
And let many dreams come true.

We had a long way to go
And none to us the path show.

We will wipe the tears from the
Eyes that we made sad
And give them reasons
Why of us should they be glad.

None to lead
None to follow
Together we accede
To sail through the darkness' hollow.

It is no use to just try
And later find time to cry
We will surely do it
And then on the throne shall together we sit.

As long as we can hope,
To succeed there is infinite scope.
In our world so dark,
We need to rekindle the fire with the immortal spark.

"There were times so tough
There were times so rough
But there won't be time to shed tears of regret
But only lots of smiles and laughter to spread.

None to lead
None to follow
Together we accede
To leave behind the darkness' hollow

Into the brightness of the world
Like the phoenix we did rise,
To the world's surprise
As our competitors kept making violent cries.

The war is finally won,
But no streams of blood did run
We thank all those to our need who did cater
And do not wait for an opportunity later.

We had a long way to go
And none to us the path show.

Down my eyes ran, two drops of tear
Not of happiness
Nor of sadness
But of fear...

Someone so dear
Someone to my heart so near,
I made a universal cry
Please do not say goodbye... "

Comments

  1. Rishav Kumar22 May 2015 at 07:47

    Nice 1..."a chance to win a many hearts, and throw success doors apart"...eye catcher...

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  2. Unknown22 May 2015 at 09:45

    Great piece of work... Some works are not to impress rather diverge straight from heart and mind of a beautiful soul.. And this is surely the best example of such a rarest one.. And the transition from me to us through the journey was appreciable...

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    1. Subrato Banerjee22 May 2015 at 10:03

      glad you feel so. Thank u for such an
      encouraging comment

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  3. Unknown22 May 2015 at 10:04

    "Darkness' Hollow" used efficiently...already impressed by the writer...waiting for other writings to publish!!!

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  4. Unknown22 May 2015 at 11:29

    A beautiful piece of work...especially the stanza " there were times so tough......". Shows hope and optimism..

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